When You Give Up Something You Love

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I’m rewriting some third person point of view chapters into first person for Darkwalker.

I’ve come across my first omniscient “little did he know” type sentence.

Stranger Than Fiction

I can’t fix it in the suitable point of view. Exactly halfway into the book, I give the first hint at the ending, and unfortunately, I have to let it go.

I’m quite sad to see it disappear into nothing. It’s one of my favourite sentences, but it just doesn’t fit no matter how much I tweak it.

It’s also a spoiler, so I can’t post it here. But be guaranteed that it’s the first problem I’ve come across turning my high fantasy from sometimes-third-person-POV to completely-first-person-POV.

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I'm Lissa, an indie author and proud advocate of the Oxford comma! Originally from Australia, I spent a delightful couple of years exploring England before making my way back home. Armed with a BA (Hons) in English Literature, I write evocative, cinematic romance with heart-pumping action and adventure - and just the right amount of kissing, of course!