Valentine Flash Fiction #3: Kissed By A Rose

Prompt: roses, kiss.

Word count: 250.

This one is a little different. With those prompts I decided to be inspired by Seal’s 1994 hit song ‘Kissed By A Rose’.

There used to be a graying tower alone on the sea.
You became the light on the dark side of me.

Mitch had been alone for thirty years, manning the lighthouse up at Dead Man’s Point every night without fail. Every evening before the sun sank from sight he’d climb the winding staircases – becoming a greater effort as the years wore on – clean the giant mirrors, and lit the fire that reflected and shone as a warning beacon to the ships that passed by – mostly ore ships, and less of them as the years went on (the mines were closing). On foggy nights he stayed awake with hot coffee in a thermos and a blanket, manning the foghorn.

Every night in the blinking light he thought about Katarina.

He’d planted a dozen red rose bushes for her birthday the year she disappeared. He tended to the bushes every morning, just as the sun came up and before he went to bed. There was only one bush left now – the others had succumbed to the cold and the wind, the loneliness of the tall peak and its single grey tower.

The rumours at the small village he visited monthly for supplies sometimes reached his ears. The wailing wind that spread through the rocky tors was the final scream of a woman who had thrown herself off the high cliffs, unable to take the isolation any more. Some people thought she’d turned into a seagull for the freedom she longed for and was denied. Some people whispered that Mitch was responsible for her disappearance.

It should have been called Dead Woman’s Point.

PS – I like this one so much I might turn it into a whole story one day.

Valentine Flash Fiction #2: After The Break Up

Prompt: chocolate, heart.

Word count: 300.

I turned it into a chocolate heart – and I never said my Valentine shorts were going to be Valentine-ey! Also, I have no idea what is up with both of them being ‘After the’ so far… maybe I’ll turn it into a theme?

Did Mina make the right choice breaking up with Richard?

After The Break Up

 

Mina wiped her eyes and vowed never to fall in love again. Not after Richard’s blatant disregard for her feelings, his careless attitude towards her friends, and his constant pressuring to get married as soon as possible and have children.

She was far too young to get married! She was twenty-three, had a bright career ahead of her at the art gallery, and wasn’t about to quit to become an older man’s trophy wife.

If only he understood. Instead, he imagined that if he showered her with enough gifts she’s acquiesce to his demands, become pliable in his hands like putty. Mina knew she was stronger than that!

She blew her nose and crept up the stairs to her bedroom, remembering the time when she was off work sick with pneumonia for three weeks. Every day Richard had visited, bringing a different kind of sweet every day. She’d built quite a little collection, which over the past few days she had devoured in utter misery. Now there was only one piece left. A little chocolate heart. One small reminder of her connection to Richard – the only thing in her apartment.

Once Mina went back to work, Richard had suggested they move in together. That was the beginning of Mina’s resistance. She had grown more and more miserable as the date approached, for of course she had said yes. She didn’t want to leave her nice cozy apartment, a ten minute walk from her art gallery in the city. She didn’t want to leave her favourite coffee shop, her dry cleaner’s, her friends and family, to move out to the suburbs with Richard.

She only wanted to forget him. There was one thing left in her apartment that reminded her of him.

She approached the little chocolate heart and unwrapped it…

Valentine Flash Fiction #1: After The Sunset

Prompt: Love, romance.

Word count: 250.

Not the easiest of prompts, but my volunteer did pull them from a hat so what more can I ask?

 Ever wonder what happened after the cowboy saved his damsel and rode off into the sunset?

After The Sunset

The night’s activities couldn’t have gone more wrong.

John helped Jane down from his trusty steed, and swept her into his arms. Jane clung to him in fright, for no one had ever picked her up before. He tried to soothe her with kisses, but couldn’t quite reach her lips. She didn’t realise what he was trying to do, for she was too busy trying to spit a bug out of her mouth.

John shifted Jane’s weight and nearly dropped her. She shrieked in his ear and swatted at another insect tangled in her windswept hair. John staggered towards his little ranch house. He was used to hog-tying people and slinging them over his shoulder, not carrying them in his arms.

Jane shrieked again when John stepped over the threshold – he had banged her head on the door frame. Frustrated, John let Jane slip from his arms. Jane looked around: the little house had a rickety single bed held together by ropes, a half-empty bottle of whisky next to it, and an old chipped bathtub in the opposite corner. She wanted to faint.

“Jane?” John said gently, his voice husky. “Ya’ll right?”

She nodded weakly. This wasn’t exactly the happy ever after she’d imagined when he’d face down Doctor ‘The Duke’ Nichols and pulled her off the train tracks. She’d thought his house would at least be clean, with perhaps an oven or at least a clean bed.

Oh well, she thought. At least this is true love.

What’s Happened Here?

Valentine’s Day has taken over the blog!

Whether you’re single, anti-Valentine’s Day or taken, enjoy the new temporary layout.

I was planning on posting some flash fiction inspired by romance every day during the lead up to the most commercialised ‘holiday’-that-isn’t-a-holiday but my grandfather’s untimely death coupled with an international move has forced me to rein back. I wanted to enter Lady Timony’s #DearValentine bloghop but the timing is just off for me. I’m moving countries part-way through the challenge and I wouldn’t want to let the other contestants down.

Instead I might work on some original 100-300 word flash fictions (I love them SO MUCH) and I might post some teasers from unpublished manuscripts… you never know, you might be in luck! Especially as seeing I’m not very good at writing romance…

Just Popping In

I’ve not been sure whether or not I should post something so personal on my writing blog, but I’ve decided that I’m going to because it explains why I’m not online very much lately. I’ve been absent from my usual haunts, popping on once or twice a day to say something if I need to – like  to mention to Lauren DeStefano that I dreamt about Wither, or to thank my totally awesome friend on Goodreads for helping me find a very important poem.

Yesterday my grandfather passed away in Australia. He’s been increasingly ill for about the last eighteen months, and I’d been holding out hope that he’d last until I got home and I’d get to say goodbye. Unfortunately his weakened immune system couldn’t hold off a respiratory infection and he died peacefully in the presence of his family. I was asked to track down the poem I mentioned earlier to confirm its title and author for his funeral.

My grandfather is my hero. He was forcibly taken from his Ukrainian village by the Nazis when he was a young man. I don’t know many details, because he never talked about it and we were encouraged never to ask, but he escaped the factory and migrated to Australia. He met my grandmother, who was also an immigrant avoiding the war, and they settled in my home state and had a family.

The Viking and I are having a subdued Australia Day celebration tomorrow. But if I’m not around lately, now you know why.