NaNoWriMo Day 22: Blood And Seduction

Word Count Goal:36,674

Achievement: 41,023

Soundtrack: Iron Saviour, Nightwish, and Andrew Lloyd Webber’s 1980s romance music

Today was fun. I wrote the Lachlan seducing Tina but not really scene I’ve been aching to do and now Tina’s going to kick butt on the people who’ve been bullying Sarah (trying not to spoil too much what’s actually going on is really hard!!). I struggled for a bit putting the actions in order because I know there’s five specific things I want to happen, I just didn’t know how I could smoothly transition from one to the other. I think I’ve got it now. Of course it will need re-writing because first drafts are often clumsy and I know mine is! I was trying to get down everything I saw in my head, except that when I was listening to Iron Saviour (heavy speed metal) Tina wanted to go head to head with Lachlan and fight him, declare her non-virginity and not try to outwit him at all. I had to change to something softer because if she revealed that now, she’d have to reveal she was a demon hunter and I know that can’t happen because the witches still need to think she’s part of their coven! Oh, Tina, if only you weren’t so strong willed.

In non-NaNo related news, after living in the UK for eighteen months I finally signed up for a library card. My library is within walking distance, and I don’t really have an excuse as to why it took me so long. I guess I thought I was okay with all of my partner’s books and the books I brought with me, not to mention the books I’ve bought since I’ve lived here… but who am I kidding? Libraries are like opium dens to me (at least, I imagine so). I’m so excited to visit the library in a couple of days and pick up my card that you’d think I was going to visit a house filled with puppies!

NaNoWriMo Day 21: Conversations With Dead People

Don’t you just love my Joss Whedon references?

Word Count Goal: 35,007

Achievement: 39,016

Soundtrack: The Phantom of the Opera original West End recording and some mixed writing music from a previous playlist.

Today’s scene extended Tina’s conversation with the female vampire, who I’ve named with the place holder Jane. I didn’t know how it was going to turn out, but I clumsily managed to get them allied and even tentative friends. That will require some going over for the second draft. Jane wants something from Tina, and Tina wants something from Jane. Also, Chelsea showed up, which was interesting. I mean, she had to be at the party because she has an important role to play, but her reaction to Tina being there with Lachlan made the mean girl in me lash out. Oops. I also hinted that maybe Connor is bisexual, which is totally awesome, because we need more LGBT characters in young adult fiction.

Part of me wants to skip ahead because I miss Ten only like HEAPS and I want him to come back in, but I know I need to play out the rest of the scene before he can even get there so I need to stick to my guns and write what comes to me before he arrives. Oh Ten, why are you so awesome?

NaNoWriMo Day 20: Tina Faces Her Destiny

Word Count Goal: 33,340

Achievement: 37,254 (2,527)

Soundtrack: Playlist of Epica, Within Temptation and Nightwish with a sprinkling of Hayley Westenra.

I am learning to embrace descriptions. Descriptions of what people are wearing (however brief), of how they look, of the locations involved. Tina’s finally made it to the blood magic party and because it’s a brand new location I felt I had to delve into what the place looks like. Surprisingly, a loose end tied itself up with me. Apparently the party’s being hosted by the vampire that’s been looking for Tina for staking her vampire ex-boyfriend (Tina’s, not the vampire’s). The vampire only has a place holder name at the time until I find something more era-relevant. I think she’s about eighty years old. It makes sense to me to have a vampire hosting a blood magic party, but seeing as how she’s newer to town than even Tina is, I’m trying to figure out how she rose to such power so quickly and made friends with the coven of blood magick using witches.

I didn’t want to start writing today and considered taking some time off. I didn’t want to write because although I’ve been thinking of this sequence a lot, I was a little afraid to put it into practice. Luckily once I started writing it flowed relatively easily. I haven’t hit another wall like I did at 10K, I am simply procrastinating because I don’t think I can translate what happens in my head well enough to the page. Luckily, Tina’s already gotten in to trouble – just add conflict is my motto after all! As an added bonus, Connor (remember the guy from the #nerdpowerpost?) is at the party as well, so even though Sarah and her boyfriend Nick are kind of helpless if any bad shit goes down, Connor can back Tina up.

I know several things need to happen, but I’m willing to let them take their time: Chelsea has to show up and Tina’s given the opportunity to use blood magic on her, Sarah gets tortured for punching Chelsea (sorry, Sarah! But you’re just about the most important thing there to Tina) and Ten breaks in with a bunch of allies to rescue Tina from Lachlan. I don’t know how I’m going to settle this problem with the vampire, seeing as how she needs to survive to the climax, but it looks like I’ve got a lot of action and fun to be writing for the next few thousand words!

NaNoWriMo Day 19: When Heroines Fight Back Against The Hot Asshole

Word Count Goal: 31,673

Achievement: 34,727

Soundtrack: Nada

Sometimes I wonder where my word count goes. 1667 per day doesn’t seem enough when I’m really getting in to something. But it’s a good place to stop because I have other things I need to do, like finish a galley and start critiquing a manuscript for a friend that’s relying on me.

And like I said yesterday, every time I think I’m nearly at the blood magic party, something happens that adds drama and conflict and I can’t quite get there yet because what I’m writing is setting it all up and is so full of awesome. Like today, when Tina punched Lachlan in the face for being an asshole (yay #teamniceboy!). And in fact, I only really wrote about 1K worth of that part because earlier in the day I suddenly saw Tina confessing to Ten that she’d been the one to stake Noah and I had to write 500-ish words worth of that scene down, even though it’s not due to take place until after the party.

Eh, you take what you can get when you’re a writer. I used to write sporadically, all over the place. I’ve tried to train myself into being a more linear writer and for the most part it’s worked. I occasionally get snatches of conversation I need to write down and save for later.

I might come back and write some more after I’ve finished my book. I’ve been looking forward to the party scene so much now I’m quite scared anything I write on the page won’t stand up to what I see in my head.

NaNoWriMo: Day 18: Another Violent Scene

Word Count Goal: 30,006

Achievement: 33,026

Soundtrack: Assassin’s Creed Revelations Soundtrack.

I’ve done it again. A little bit of violence, and hoping that Tina doesn’t come off as a victim. It’s one of the things I’m most desperate to avoid in all of my writing: my women are never victims, even when violence is perpetrated against them. And because I tend to write warrior-type women: ninja cyborgs, elemental sorceresses, and now a demon hunter, they often get at least one and often two violent episodes per novel. Sometimes they get knocked about: I don’t like making them perfect, so they do get hit about and they never come up perfectly clean with every hair in place. They do come up, though, because they’re tough.  And even though my women are good warriors, sometimes there’s nothing you can do against a particular assailant if they get you in just the right place. I’ve learned this from wrestling with my hubby, who is by far the strongest man I know. Even he’s helpless sometimes against me *wink wink*.

Every time I think I’m about to start writing the party scene I realise I need to do something just before it. So I’m still not at it just yet. Which is fine by me. I know I’m developing things, weaving things together, giving Tina and Lachlan more character. And I know why there’s a party going on, too. Someone very important to the plot and to Tina is in charge of it, and Tina’s going to learn a few things before the night is through. I can’t wait to write more about Tina and Sarah’s friendship, and the part when Ten comes crashing through a window to save her? I’ve been aching to get to it. Even a tough girl needs a friend or two to rely on every so often.