Post-NaNoWrimo Thoughts And Stats

How did I go?

Most days I stayed on track, but I often slipped behind by a day or so, so this year I was often playing catch-up. With NaNoWriMo ending on a Wednesday and with my health unpredictable at night time (I have a severe allergy to pepper, and sometimes you can’t be certain it’s not included in processed food even if you do read the ingredients) I ended up writing 3K on the Saturday, Sunday, and Monday before the Wednesday so I knew I would finish a couple of days early.

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Did I Achieve My Goal?

Since my goal was to complete NaNo and knowing it wouldn’t be the whole book, yeah, I did achieve my goal.

Also, my goal was to write a love triangle where the girl is in love with one guy but having it off with another and boy, that was hard to navigate. It’s hard to define love against desire and mutual benefits. It’s hard tow rite why she’s a better match for one or the other, or perhaps she’s a better sexual match for one and romantic match for the other. Ever since on of my novels got rejected because the editor didn’t understand why my couple were in love despite me building a companionship and mutual interests and common backgrounds with them, I’ve been neurotic about “why does this character love this character? How do you show it? WHAT IS LOVE EVEN?” I don’t even know. How do I know I love my husband? I just do. How can you convince someone reading a book of the same thing?

What did I learn?

I learned that after a full day at work, a one and a half hour round trip driving to pick my husband up from work, and then sitting in a chair to write nearly 2000 words for a couple of hours is EXHAUSTING. Not just physically exhausting but mentally exhausting as well. I don’t know how authors with day jobs do it, to be honest. Sometimes I was nodding off at my computer at 10pm.

I learned that even writing 3-5K words per day is a huge mental challenge and those who write 10K a day consistently and claim it’s easy are either insane or don’t care about the quality of their work (or don’t have day jobs).

I learned that I work best when I break it up into 1000 word chunks and tackle those one at a time.

I learned that when I’m struggling, I update my word count every 200 words, but when it’s flowing I can write nearly 800 or so before I remember to update my word count.

I learned I really like updating my word count.

I learned I quite like being a planster – that’s the hip new word for people who both plot and ‘pants’ their novel (writing by the seat of their pants/unplanned). I had a vague summary and split it into the the required number of words I estimated I’d need for each act in a 3 act story, but I left a lot of it blind so a) I didn’t know what would happen and feel discouraged to write it and b) I had room to wriggle and play with the word count.

I actually don’t feel burned out this time. I feel quite eager to continue on and finish the book.

How’s the book going?

Like the last time I did NaNo, in 2014, the book’s not finished. I think I might need around 10 or even another 20K to wrap up it up. When I finished 2014’s book, I wrote an extra 13K. I’m not sure how much longer this book will need, as I only have a vague outline in my head and the final page already written.

I did have one particular scene I was really looking forward to writing, but due to my planster-ing, the book changed direction and I never got to write it.

Normally I hit a mental wall at about 10-15K and find it really hard to push through, but because I planned a lot of the early part of the novel I just rocketed past my usual wall laughing all the way. Also, there were no walls this time. Maybe because it’s a sequel?

What’s in store for the future?

I will always attempt NaNoWriMo unless there’s some kind of catastrophe in my life, so at the moment I’m planning on doing it next year. However, I want to write the third book in this trilogy before then, so I don’t know what next year’s novel will be.

Did you do NaNoWriMo this year? How did your writing go?

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Unconventional Tools for Writing: DollDivine Dressmaker

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I’ve used DollDivine before to recreate the Disney Princesses in my blog series studying the Disney Princesses. It was fun to recreate the iconic outfits as best I could with the limited designs offered.

In my writing, I often skip over what a person is wearing. I love clothing descriptions in the literature I read, but I tend to just see faces when I’m writing, and I forget to describe what a character is wearing.

DollDivine is one of my favourite procrastination destinations because it can be useful as well. See, all these pretty clothes I design, well, maybe my characters can wear them! And then when I’m struggling to describe what my characters are wearing, I have a visual reference right in front of me!

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Yes, Tally’s face is different in all the dolls and no, I don’t know why I gave her a wolf in the second one. Maybe it’s Ash?

I find the combined fun of working on the outfits and then being able to describe them really help me in my writing!

Are there any unconventional tools you use to help with your writing?

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NaNoWriMo: Research

I’ve mentioned before that it’s my curse to do a whole heap of research so I know exactly what I’m talking about for something that may just be an incidental prop.

It’s based on the whole ‘write what you know’ standard.

If I want to write about, for example, a pig farm, even if it’s only in one scene, I have to do some research to find out how to breed pigs, when piglets are born, how many in a litter, and then due to a character’s throwaway line I had to research why humans don’t typically consume pig’s milk.

I found out some fascinating stuff:

  • Pig’s milk is higher in fat and more watery than cow’s milk, but much harder to milk.
  • Cows get oxcytocin for about 4 minutes once they start being milked, which helps prolong the milking: pigs only get 15 seconds, enough to get the piglet suckling.
  • Cows can also get pregnant while lactating, while pigs cannot.

I don’t mention those above facts in the story, but it sure answered my question of why don’t human consume pig’s milk, and helped my understanding of the subject. Now I can confidently write about why humans don’t consume pig milk!

Beautiful Books November 2016

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Beautiful Books is a linkup hosted by Cait @ Paper Fury and Sky @ Further Up and Further In.

It’s aimed at writers so we can answer the questions about our characters and our books. It’s designed to help you get to know your book better! (And also give your followers a sneak peek of your works-in-progresses.)

Beautiful BOOKS

Cait and Sky say: “Just like every year, we’re giving our monthly link up “Beautiful People” a small rest so we can focus on “Beautiful Books”.”

The Book

My WIP is called Winter’s Wrath and it’s the sequel to 2014’s Winter Witch (I missed 2015 due to personal reasons).

The Questions

  1. Overall, how is your mental state, and how is your novel going?

I’m feeling confident. I’m not entirely sure where this novel is heading because I plantsed it (I plotted about half and knew that inspiration would hit while I was writing for the other half – of which I am yet to write).

2. What’s your first sentence (or paragraph)?

A hand gripped my shoulder as I swayed and nearly face-planted on the shimmering ballroom floor.

3. Who’s your current favourite character in your novel?

My favourite character is Dover, who is a hulking, softly-spoken barbarian warrior with a heart of gold who teaches Tally self-defence and protects her like a valued little sister.

Maybe because in my head I’ve cast him to be played by 6’3″ WWE heavyweight champ Roman Reigns? His finishing move is called the Superman Punch.

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Yum.

4. What do you love about your novel so far?

I love that I’m exploring the difference between romantic love and sexual love, and I have a situation where a couple are forced to get married to keep up appearances but aren’t allowed to be a real married couple, if you know what I mean.

I also love that it is racially diverse. Almost every character is a person of colour. The main enemy are called Highlanders and they’re a re-imagined amalgamation and appropriation of the Scots and Celts. The main ‘race’ is based on Indian/Middle Eastern appearances because that’s part of my family heritage. But I’m still writing it from the point of view of a ‘white’ girl, albeit a girl whose whiteness is significantly different to whiteness in the real world.

5. Have you made any hilarious typos or other mistakes?

I haven’t made any hilarious typos but my fingernails are somewhat long this month so I do keep making small typos.

6. What is your favourite to write: beginning, middle, or end — and why?

I like to write the middle parts. This is a sequel, so I have to be careful in what I’m recapping by giving a new audience enough to entice them and leave them wanting more and not so much that I’m boring people who have read the first book and already know everything.

7. What are your writing habits? Is there a specific snack you eat? Do you listen to music? What time of day do you write best? Feel free to show us a picture of your writing space!

I have a day job and I have sleep apnea, so I’m not one of those people who can get up early and dash off my words before work. In fact, by the time I come home, eat dinner and unwind a little bit, I barely have time to write my words before I need to spend quality time with my husband and relax before bed so I can hopefully get enough sleep to be functional the next day.

My power food is chocolate.

Normally I do have playlists but this time I’m going with silence.

I actually write my best between 11pm and 3am, but I’m normally asleep then because as I said, I have a day job.

8. How private are you about your novel while you’re writing? Do you need a cheer squad or do you work alone (like, ahem, Batman)?

I don’t mind talking about my novel but I won’t let anyone watch my while I write it. I find the creative process very private and I don’t want anyone seeing the way my mind works, especially since I like to write quite violent things. I don’t need a cheer squad although it sure would be nice to have a team of beta readers eager to get their paws on my next manuscript.

9. What keeps you writing even when it’s hard?

In NaNoWriMo it’s the idea of having that 50K at the end of the month, and that there are a heap of other people doing it as well, but that not many of them will actually finish. I want to be a finisher. I normally hit a wall around 10-15K but I timed it this time to have some scenes I was really eager to write happening then,

10. What are your top 3 pieces of writing advice?

Just do it. Opening the vein means the words will flow.

It’s OK not to write every single day but try not to fall too far behind. For me, three thousand instead of 1667 isn’t that big a deal: it’s just 2000 (which is nearly 1667 anyway) plus another one thousand.

When you’re finishing for the day, leave a reminder about the next scene you want to write so you’re not sitting there staring at a blank screen when you come back the next day. You know exactly what you have to write and you’re keen to do it.

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